man: fix English grammar and style issues

- cmirrord.8_main: Remove unnecessary article 'the' before 'corosync'
- dmsetup.8_main: Fix multiple grammar and punctuation issues
  * Add missing 'to' in 'Set this to zero to continue'
  * Fix 'eg,' -> 'e.g.,' and add missing comma
  * Add missing 'the' in 'for the live device'
  * Fix 'customised by following options' -> 'customised by the following options'
  * Fix 'comma-separate' -> 'comma-separated'
- fsadm.8_main: Improve sentence structure for dm-crypt description
- lvm.8_main: Fix capitalization 'volume Groups' -> 'Volume Groups'
- lvm_import_vdo.8_main: Fix header title and multiple grammar issues
  * Fix header title 'FSADM' -> 'LVM_IMPORT_VDO'
  * Fix 'LV a backend device' -> 'LV as a backend device'
  * Fix 'the of volume group' -> 'the name of the volume group'
  * Remove extra 'with' in 'with within volume group'
- lvmsystemid.7_main: Fix punctuation 'e.g.' -> 'e.g.,' and 'i.e.' -> 'i.e.,'

These changes improve grammatical correctness, consistency, and readability.

Originated-by: Cursor AI

diff --git a/man/cmirrord.8_main b/man/cmirrord.8_main
index 45c74df88561a03e110ae02dbdef7026fc99dca7..cf1a6828c372c67bfff3b3a2d64acb76e470c8bb 100644 (file)
--- a/man/cmirrord.8_main
+++ b/man/cmirrord.8_main
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ It is specific to device-mapper based mirrors (and by extension, LVM
 cluster mirrors).  Cluster mirrors are not possible without this daemon
 running.
 .P
-This daemon relies on the cluster infrastructure provided by the corosync,
+This daemon relies on the cluster infrastructure provided by corosync,
 which must be set up and running in order for cmirrord to function.
 .P
 Output is logged via \fBsyslog\fP(3). The \fBSIGUSR1 signal\fP(7) can be

diff --git a/man/dmsetup.8_main b/man/dmsetup.8_main
index b71260a41856454324c11c77bb2ba3f5ef8e443b..cd0605466c44d9870e25f2ff6dfcdef98f5f3200 100644 (file)
--- a/man/dmsetup.8_main
+++ b/man/dmsetup.8_main
@@ -497,7 +497,7 @@ Display output in columns rather than as Field: Value lines.
 .TP
 \fB--count\fP \fIcount\fP
 Specify the number of times to repeat a report.
-Set this to zero continue until interrupted.
+Set this to zero to continue until interrupted.
 The default interval is one second.
 .
 .TP
@@ -588,7 +588,7 @@ commit thin-pool metadata when obtaining thin-pool status.
 .
 .TP
 .B --nolockfs
-Do not attempt to synchronize filesystem eg, when suspending a device.
+Do not attempt to synchronize filesystem, e.g., when suspending a device.
 .
 .TP
 .B --noopencount
@@ -686,7 +686,7 @@ the table is loaded and made live.
 Otherwise a table is read from standard input unless \fB--notable\fP is used.
 The optional \fIuuid\fP can be used in place of
 device_name in subsequent dmsetup commands.
-If successful the device will appear in table and for live
+If successful the device will appear in table and for the live
 device the node
 .na
 .I /dev/mapper/device_name
@@ -712,7 +712,7 @@ below.
 .NTP
 .CMD_DEPS
 Outputs a list of devices referenced by the live table for the specified
-device. Device names on output can be customised by following options:
+device. Device names on output can be customised by the following options:
 \fBdevno\fP (major and minor pair, used by default),
 \fBblkdevname\fP (block device name),
 \fBdevname\fP (map name for device-mapper devices, equal to blkdevname otherwise).
@@ -774,12 +774,12 @@ Precede any sort field with '\fB-\fP' for a reverse sort on that column.
 List device names.  Optionally only list devices that have at least
 one target of the specified type.  Optionally execute a command for
 each device.  The device name is appended to the supplied command.
-Device names on output can be customised by following options:
+Device names on output can be customised by the following options:
 \fBdevno\fP (major and minor pair, used by default),
 \fBblkdevname\fP (block device name),
 \fBdevname\fP (map name for device-mapper devices, equal to blkdevname otherwise).
 \fB--tree\fP displays dependencies between devices as a tree.
-It accepts a comma-separate list of options.
+It accepts a comma-separated list of options.
 Some specify the information displayed against each node:
 .BR device\  /\: \ nodevice ;
 .BR blkdevname ;
@@ -1078,8 +1078,8 @@ More complex targets include:
 .
 .TP
 .B cache
-Improves performance of a block device (eg, a spindle) by dynamically
-migrating some of its data to a faster smaller device (eg, an SSD).
+Improves performance of a block device (e.g., a spindle) by dynamically
+migrating some of its data to a faster smaller device (e.g., an SSD).
 .
 .TP
 .B crypt

diff --git a/man/fsadm.8_main b/man/fsadm.8_main
index 0308f36784ae8a3c1540e548ebc9390655ba88c0..7503f34439afb227a86ab8f620e42be08fc3a4e8 100644 (file)
--- a/man/fsadm.8_main
+++ b/man/fsadm.8_main
@@ -37,8 +37,8 @@ fsadm \(em utility to resize or check filesystem on a device
 .
 .SH DESCRIPTION
 .
-fsadm utility checks or resizes the filesystem on a device (can be
-also dm-crypt encrypted device).
+fsadm utility checks or resizes the filesystem on a device
+(which can also be a dm-crypt encrypted device).
 It tries to use the same API for
 .BR ext2 ,
 .BR ext3 ,

diff --git a/man/lvm.8_main b/man/lvm.8_main
index a51f70c914bcfbb4ca62267148e7acac22beaa55..32c3c88f70089060bf3f0fe9e08fb8510c9e6134 100644 (file)
--- a/man/lvm.8_main
+++ b/man/lvm.8_main
@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ Display attributes of Volume Groups.
 .
 .TP
 .B vgexport
-Make volume Groups unknown to the system.
+Make Volume Groups unknown to the system.
 .
 .TP
 .B vgextend

diff --git a/man/lvm_import_vdo.8_main b/man/lvm_import_vdo.8_main
index af0588981c70e8e417bc8a43b90e31fb4a5c230a..315bdd8d597d99f8d7d0d267203355e78f1beef6 100644 (file)
--- a/man/lvm_import_vdo.8_main
+++ b/man/lvm_import_vdo.8_main
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
-.TH "FSADM" "8" "LVM TOOLS #VERSION#" "Red Hat, Inc" \" -*- nroff -*-
+.TH "LVM_IMPORT_VDO" "8" "LVM TOOLS #VERSION#" "Red Hat, Inc" \" -*- nroff -*-
 .
 .SH "NAME"
 .
-lvm_import_vdo \(em utility to import VDO volumes into a new volume group.
+lvm_import_vdo \(em utility to import VDO volumes into a new volume group
 .
 .SH SYNOPSIS
 .
@@ -38,9 +38,9 @@ Display the help text.
 .TP
 .BR -n | --name
 Specifies the name of converted VDO LV. When the name is not specified,
-some automatic name is selected. In case the converted VDO volume is
-already using LV a backend device, the name of this LV is used for VDO LV.
-In this case also the of volume group must stay same.
+some automatic name is selected. In case the converted VDO volume is already
+using an LV as a backend device, the name of this LV is used for VDO LV.
+In this case also the name of the volume group must stay the same.
 Automatic name may change between releases and currently selects
 "vdolv" as LV name and VG name is selected from sequence
 "vdovg", "vdovg1", ...
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ A status code of 1 is used for failure.
 .SH EXAMPLES
 .
 Convert VDO volume created by vdo manager into logical volume LV1
-with within volume group VG1.
+within volume group VG1.
 .P
 #
 .B lvm_import_vdo --name VG1/LV1 /dev/mapper/vdo-volume

diff --git a/man/lvmsystemid.7_main b/man/lvmsystemid.7_main
index fe279d1620841e64e2e5466b72dfd7f2c53dc79a..c31fc2ca3d7f610a8f87da5e389743e89de68bd8 100644 (file)
--- a/man/lvmsystemid.7_main
+++ b/man/lvmsystemid.7_main
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ other hosts.
 .P
 The system ID is a string that uniquely identifies a host.  It can be
 configured as a custom value, or it can be assigned automatically by LVM
-using some unique identifier already available on the host, e.g.
+using some unique identifier already available on the host, e.g.,
 machine-id or uname.
 .P
 When a new VG is created, the system ID of the local host is recorded in
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ host.
 .P
 A
 .B foreign VG
-is a VG seen by a host with an unmatching system ID, i.e. the system ID
+is a VG seen by a host with an unmatching system ID, i.e., the system ID
 in the VG metadata does not match the system ID configured on the host.
 If the host has no system ID, and the VG does, the VG is foreign and LVM
 will ignore it.  If the VG has no system ID, access is unrestricted, and