You don't want to know if a particular process (of known pid) is running (this can be done by testing if /proc/1234/ exists for pid 1234) but if some process is running a given command (or a given executable).
Notice that the kill(2) syscall can be portably used to check if a given process is running (with a 0 signal, e.g. kill(pid,0)). From inside a program, this is a common way to check that a process of known pid is still existing and running (or waiting).
You could use the pidof command to find the processes running some executable, e.g. pidof zsh to find all the zsh processes. You could also use killall -s 0 zsh
And you might be interested by the pgrep utility and the /proc filesystem.
iflooks fine. Why don't you run it and find out yourself? It took me a minute to copy the if into a file and start it.